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Feb 4, 2005 2:42:47 GMT -5
Post by Um Jammer Lammy on Feb 4, 2005 2:42:47 GMT -5
I'm enjoying the poems ladies and gents. Thanks a bunch. Keep them coming!
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Feb 4, 2005 3:03:09 GMT -5
Post by Sad Peter Pan on Feb 4, 2005 3:03:09 GMT -5
he is very suportive of it!! what does your girlfriend think? if you dont mind me asking. that poem was soothing. it made me feel like i was resting in a light blue room with white flowers. I have many poems and i know mine are a bit dark , as i have some that are weird and strange and most are in the name of Love. hope you dont mind. Some of my poems she doesn't get, others she said she wants to get tattood on her back. Glad you and Jam Lam are enjoying. I don't mind at all, but after interpretting that last poem of yours, I went on to another one and the first line was "Hate is never complete" Just too much gloom for one dose is all. I like the last ones you posted though, they feel like mini-stories.
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Feb 14, 2005 4:51:18 GMT -5
Post by Um Jammer Lammy on Feb 14, 2005 4:51:18 GMT -5
Why have all the poems stopped? I guess I should get into the line of fire and post a few to contribute.
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Feb 14, 2005 20:55:55 GMT -5
Post by Sad Peter Pan on Feb 14, 2005 20:55:55 GMT -5
*awaits eagerly*
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erin1979
Junebug
change is never and forever is my heart.
Posts: 66
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Feb 14, 2005 23:24:12 GMT -5
Post by erin1979 on Feb 14, 2005 23:24:12 GMT -5
I will post one soon till then you shall await my words.
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erin1979
Junebug
change is never and forever is my heart.
Posts: 66
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Feb 15, 2005 12:13:48 GMT -5
Post by erin1979 on Feb 15, 2005 12:13:48 GMT -5
Today as I awoke to thy wild eyes.. I eat the apple as it looked so soft. In the rainbow moonlight I mate to give myself to thee. I am riding on air till the dawn of the morning. with this I give myself whole. To him I kneel on my hands to offer thy my heart. touch my lips feel my hair for it is soft with a scent of amber. Feel my body for it trembles with lust for you. red lips touch your lips with such desire. how this is the morning song we sing.
for jonathan.
erin.
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Feb 15, 2005 16:49:16 GMT -5
Post by Um Jammer Lammy on Feb 15, 2005 16:49:16 GMT -5
The following isn't particularly nice and its really not one of my favourites but it will serve a nice contrast to my later posts. However I do find its has quite a punch to it.
'Only One'
Only one question The answer may thrill Dream it to oblivion That is my will
Crucify the sinner Crush the destroyer There will be no winner There will be no surrender
You sabotage my being Actions of a traitor You will hang from my ceiling There will be no later
My mind lives a riot Where to go from here My fury grows silent The crazy mannequin breathes near...
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Feb 15, 2005 17:40:45 GMT -5
Post by Jonny on Feb 15, 2005 17:40:45 GMT -5
props to jammer lammy for that one. i liked it.
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Feb 16, 2005 12:40:29 GMT -5
Post by Sad Peter Pan on Feb 16, 2005 12:40:29 GMT -5
props to jammer lammy for that one. i liked it. ditto
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Mar 6, 2005 2:45:20 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 6, 2005 2:45:20 GMT -5
Hey, hope its okay if i contribute a few of my poems, most of these are pretty straight forward and written from experience so i hope you enjoy!
Drain
The end has come and drawn me near I cannot flee it nor can I fight I was afraid but now I have no fear For this is my final night
On this cruel place called Earth The pain inside has taken toll A new life will have birth Disposing my tortured soul
It all seems surreal This whole goddamn notion But no longer can I feel This ecstasy and emotion
I toss and turn Waiting for my time to burn…
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Mar 6, 2005 2:45:58 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 6, 2005 2:45:58 GMT -5
Anger Management
I hate them in vain I wish they would die They are driving me insane Just making me cry
Too much rage Built up inside They don’t credit my age Only run and hide
No one affects me the way they do The chemicals connect and then I react All the frustration boils up too Then I have no power over the way I act
Simply can’t figure out why Things have got to be this way All I ever really do is try To hear the things you have to say
Just this once hear me out Let me show you how I feel Then for once I would not pout And my love for you would be real
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Mar 6, 2005 2:46:47 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 6, 2005 2:46:47 GMT -5
Too Late
Please don’t let this be My youth is at stake No longer will I be free Cant this all be fake?
My choices were unwise Why am I such a fool I listened to his lies Wanting to be real cool
Well now I’m really fucked Feeling way too much stress Thought my life already sucked Now it is one big mess
My dreams are diminished What a mistake to make Relationships will be finished What am I to do for God’s sake!
Wish I could turn back the hands of time Undo my pathetic old past I would pay any amount of dime Cant bare to grow up so fast
I have learn from my mistakes If only I could have seen before What a mess it can all make When you are being a teenage whore
What has happened is done A new life will enter Then will begin the fun This baby will become my centre
I hope I can do something To relieve me of this weight But he doesn’t want a ring He’s ran and I’m too late
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Mar 6, 2005 2:48:14 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 6, 2005 2:48:14 GMT -5
One Time Dependency
While sittin’ here sipping a beer My troubles seem to disappear
As I begin to inhale No longer do I fail
After one more line I’m feeling fine
When I pop another pill It’s goodbye to feeling ill
A quick little fix of skag Stops life being such a drag
Happiness fills my blood Bad memories start to flood My tortured soul is at rest At the moment I feel the best!
This cloudy mass Of unnatural gas Begins to clear And now I do fear
There goes the fog Give me some grog!
My well being begins to sag All I want is a goddamn bag!
Now comes the low I just want some snow!
Darkness ruins my fantasy Let me take some ecstasy!
I am feeling sunk Desperately need some junk!
These aids I crave None left to save My body surges Cant’ control the urges
Madly want it now Don’t know why and how I really need a hit Or how to beat it
I should have really known That this joy was on loan If only I had been firm I wouldn’t screw up the long term…
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Mar 6, 2005 2:49:04 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 6, 2005 2:49:04 GMT -5
this is so very, very sarcastic...
Surreal Sanctuary
The world I see is so very great Without the slightest trace of hate Oh how much joy I feel To breath and feel and to be real
What a very beautiful place Wrapped in such silky lace Awfully grateful for being secure In this paradise that is so pure
Graceful just like these floating dove We are all so truly madly in love Not a chance for our bond to sever Our harmony is here to stay forever!
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Mar 6, 2005 2:49:37 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 6, 2005 2:49:37 GMT -5
Leave Me Alone
I don’t particularly care If you look at me and stare Your piercing glares of disgust Only projects waves of lust
Just because you’re a big old slob Stuck in a boring dead-end job You can’t drag me down And force me to drown
Taking me to your low Won’t dissolve your sorrow If life is getting out of hand Get up and make a stand!
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