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Mar 21, 2005 4:26:25 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 21, 2005 4:26:25 GMT -5
hey that was really beautiful, great use of words! I felt very powerful, fantasy vibes from that. good work!
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poetry
Mar 21, 2005 5:00:56 GMT -5
Post by Um Jammer Lammy on Mar 21, 2005 5:00:56 GMT -5
Thanks a bunch. No one ever gets to read them so I never know how they would be receicved by others. Keep posting more!
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Mar 21, 2005 6:20:28 GMT -5
Post by Jenno99 on Mar 21, 2005 6:20:28 GMT -5
straight off the top of my head....and dont even try to say this isnt rough, cos it needs a lot of work
Carve my name into wood Let it float through the ages My label will be known But identity remains a mystery
Pour my blood through the rivers Spread my life to the world My identity will be shown But my footsteps remain a mystery
Spill the ink from my heart My achievements and falls open to all My footsteps will be exposed But I still remain a mystery
Take a leap off the edge Faces turn to gasp I have opened myself And blessed all with my history
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